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September 7, 2008Since I have a lot of books from my first run out there now, I would love to get comments from people who have read, or are reading it. What parts did you like? If you put the book down and didn’t get back to it what caused the “stall”? Is anything confusing? I know that my first run was not well edited by myself and I am starting to revise it. I just wanted to get copies out to the people who prepaid and waited so patiently. And, I’m savin’ up money for a second run. My son-in-law,who is working on his PHD in literature, advised me that authors usually need to focus on getting works of short fiction published first, so I’m working on some and will be posting them here for your perusal. I will also try submitting some pieces. Anyone have ideas on where I should submit? Meanwhile go ahead, criticize my book…I can take it! In fact I WANT it..perhaps it’ll make me a better writer.

Hi, I am Paul Driver’s wife, and I got the book from his mother Kelly.
I just read it and loved it, it was interesting and kept my attention the whole way through. I am not a writer but I do read a lot of books. At first I was confused with the jumps in time, but as they kept happening, they grew on me and I really enjoyed them. All the questions that I had about what was happening with different people from the story were answered, there was a conclusion to the many different story lines.
I look forward to reading future books written by you. Sorry, not a lot of criticism for you to work with, but I couldn’t think of any. Paul will be reading the book next and perhaps he will have something for you to work with.